Crit

After finishing my visualisation, I showed my work to my classmates and my tutors. Overall, the feedback I got was positive, and I received a lot of praise for my drawings. I also demonstrated how the iPad features worked well. However, there were some things that could be improved on, such as some parts of the interface. The arrows for turning the page left and right should go at the edge of the page rather than in the middle, and the menus should hide after a few seconds instead of taking up space throughout the whole story. Another thing i should change is the font for the settings and page select menus, as they don't fit in with the rest of the app and they are too large.